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I’m writing my first book. A cyber noir crime fiction. My protagonist is your typical P.I. 28 tech svavy. Set in Boston in the year 2126. His main love interest is his first cousin once remove. She’s a 23 year old who ran from her controlling parents to become an artist, and meets our protagonist.

How can I write this or word in a way that feels normal to read. Family will read this and don’t need the old world gears in their heads spinning with disgusting views of me or trying to find out which of my cousins I “may” be writing about.

Thoughts, suggestions, and all thing between are welcome. 

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I'm not sure what you are looking for on this site.  For a novel with a cousin relationship which I find well written, I suggest NERVE by shriveled appendage Francis.  If you are looking for editing assistance, I will be happy to assist as will others of our group.  

Are you dealing with an actual cousin relationship?  We have lots of advice on that!!  LOL

Good luck with your writing.  HUGS



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